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This is the oldest piece of writing I have on here and unsurprisingly I think it's easily the worst. This was written for a short horror story competition and, while I don't think it's completely without merit, there is a lot I would change if I could go back and alter it. In particular, I think the ending just doesn't work at all. Much like Apollyon, I think the biggest problem here is that I had more ideas than I really knew what to do with.
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